The author’s state, “we have been working on adding functionality to the existing R-package ssdtools to incorporate this capability”. In what capacity are the authors working to add this functionality?
it would be helpful to understand what were the limitations of the ECETOC workshop. Perhaps providing information as to who attended (e.g. affiliations, nationalities) and how many people attended- as one of the recommendations on page 28 Lines 51-54 is … Read More
throughout the text the author indicate nations “developed approaches”, this should be revised to indicate what agency from a particular nation developed the approach. For example:Page 5 lines 18-20: “the Canadian province of British Columbia has developed…”Page 7 lines 19-21: … Read More
Jargon and phrases like “cottage industry” , “under the hood” (line 47 pg 7) and “purpose-built software” (page 23) might not be relatable to non-North American audiences or non software experts in the field .
Major findings and limitations would have been nice to see in the abstract
In Figure 2 it is unclear to me exactly where in panel a the image for panel b is located? It would help if there was a black box in panel a showing exactly where panel b is a zoomed … Read More
Figure 1 in particular, but to a lesser degree Figure 2 and Figure 4, have really low resolution and are difficult to read. Is it possible to provide higher resolution images?
“HC” should be defined on first use and I think it would be beneficial to have a sentence explaining the reasoning for using HC5 in SSDs define= HC5
an extra sentence or two in the beginning of the introduction defining/describing exactly what an SSD is would be beneficial
Downloads now at end of this table Item# Issue Lead Others 1 an extra sentence or two in the beginning of the introduction … DF 2 “HC” and HC5 should be defined … DF 3 provide higher resolution images for … Read More